Strong Points and Flaws.
I thought that this was a good song and enjoyed listening to it. A couple of problems though was the fact that I felt as though it was too short. If you added some more beats and repeated through different sections it would sound good. I also agree with the person below me that you should have faded the rain out. It would also sound good at the end if instead of fading the whole song out, you should fade back in the rain and then let it end with the raining sound. That way it would sound more like a loop if you didn't want to make it longer.