A Bit of a Curve Ball.
The name threw me off a bit. When I read the title I was expecting something stupid and a song with no rhythm. Then when I heard it, I realized it was a song that was actually put together pretty well. Glad to see clicking on this wasn't a waste of my time, but next time I think you should pick a different, more appropriate name. This was good though.
Wasn't Bad For Something Six Years Old.
Usually when you come across something this old and with only 100 listens you don't expect much, but this wasn't bad. A couple things I didn't like was the static at the beginning which I'm not sure if it was on purpose or not. Either way I still didn't like it, I also found the beat to be just a bit dull. Is would have been better with some angel like humming vocals in the background. The ending was a little sudden as well. All in all it wasn't bad.
Nice Beat That Had Repetition.
The beat was okay for me, but it sounded too much like a Sega Genesis game theme. It wasn't bad though. I also felt like there wasn't much change in the beat either. It was a nice beat, but just wasn't a download for me.
Strong Points and Flaws.
I thought that this was a good song and enjoyed listening to it. A couple of problems though was the fact that I felt as though it was too short. If you added some more beats and repeated through different sections it would sound good. I also agree with the person below me that you should have faded the rain out. It would also sound good at the end if instead of fading the whole song out, you should fade back in the rain and then let it end with the raining sound. That way it would sound more like a loop if you didn't want to make it longer.
Thanks, meant to make it longer but just was too lazy
Started Off Good, But Held Back.
I liked the way the song started off, but I didn't exactly care for the rest of it. I thought the first 30 seconds were good and mysterious, but once the piano came I didn't really care for it. I love it when people use pianos, I just didn't like the way you used it in this song. It had that electric tint to it that didn't feel right in this song. It was good, but just didn't do it for me.
thnx 4 the listen... the piano doesn't really fit at times in the song i agree... i did create a new version, using a different piano sound base... more natural sounding... just putting the finishing touches than it'll be up :)
I would like to use this.
I hope you wouldn't mind if I used this in a show I'm making for youtube. I would love to fit this in it. Please contact me via email: firstname.lastname@example.org.
I hope you don't mind, but I am making a show for youtube and I would love to use this song in my pilot episode. Please contact me via email: email@example.com. Thank you.
Lolz, I don't come to ng for a few weeks and this song gets used finally ^^; Thanks a lot to everyone for the new reviews, and sure you can use my song Monkeybt93, I'll mail you later.
Fantastic Song As Low And Soft.
I thought the beginning , the middle part without the guitar, and the very end were the best. I thought the guitar went well with this song, I just didn't care too much for it. You shouldn't change anything about, I'm just not that much of a guitar person. Otherwise, you did a great job.
had to do something unique with it :) and I chose the celldwellerish approach lol :P it's not everyone's cup of tea really so i get it.
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